Tuesday, August 21, 2007

Ode Unto Creator Comments

Rating: 5.0

Child bride unites for questionable reasons,
Searching for something she cannot define,
self mutilating vindications for primal urges
acting like nothings wrong.
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wondering star
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purple moon 21 August 2007

Well Wondering Star, I was drawn in by your name, and then by your poem I was transfixed. Wonderful, deep, sad, and emotional. Ask for help, look for the answer, and it will become clear if recognised. There is always a helping hand somewhere in the darkness, just reach for it. well done. Take care. x

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