...........Ode To Your Innocence***** Comments

Intense pen Wardha! ! !

Good poignant write Wardha...lot of obscurity inside...the expressions- i regret the coming dawn/ i let you smile in your sleep/ i will stay up long into the dusk- make sensible mystic poetic connections there...10

Nicely penned and a poem with substance

I regret the coming dawn which will Denude you abruptly of all grace beautiful poem....straight 10! cheers

beautiful wardha........

THATS INNOCENT INDEED... :)

Ammmmmazing ode indeed...............10+

I regret the coming dawn which will Denude you abruptly of all grace This is really a wonderful poem.It reminds me of an 'Afsana' by Bano Qudsia where such a diabolical duplicity was the manifest of the write-up.

another beautiful write froma beautiful heat....thanks 10+'s

Beautiful poem.Liked it.

ill keep veiled in my silence and let you smile in your sleep as deep as the gurgling Nile speechless