Wednesday, March 19, 2014

Ode To Yesterday Comments

Rating: 3.5

VIVELA yester year thou art alive,
memories hidden from the stained eye,
Thou was the mornings breath she breathed,
Thou was the balm that lulled her sleep.
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Shanika marini Paul
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A compelling composition!

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Saadat Tahir 18 June 2014

memories hidden from the stained eye, beautiful...a great combo of the archaic and the modern...clothing lovely thoughts vnice liked

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V P Mahur 28 March 2014

Dear Paul, your poem is well written and nice. You have used English of olden age. Thanks for nice one. Please reply

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Shanika marini Paul

Shanika marini Paul

Colombo, Srilanka
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