Sunday, May 24, 2009

Ode To Water Comments

Rating: 4.8

Nay, I am no worshiper of nature
but as I am a bubble
floating on this earthen heaven
I just could not shake off
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Harun Al Nasif
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Chinedu Dike 01 December 2020

Well expressed thoughts and feelings. Great lines nicely put together. A work of an intricate mind.

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Alicia Phillips 10 July 2009

its very beautiful and i give you a 10

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Lady Grace 09 June 2009

good job dear, simplicity makes a poem more beautiful and attractive..grace

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i love how much u express things with ur words almost to make it like ur there! ! another great one! ! DLG

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Winnie Angel 08 June 2009

beautiful lines on a beautiful note!

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Sara Tehrani 02 June 2009

absaloutly beautifully put together. love the imagery words and how interesting you make the subject of something so simple. lovely read.

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Hanna Jones 02 June 2009

this is amazing, i never would have thought about a poem on water. they way you write makes it awsome, i'd give it a ten easily

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Hannah Minton 02 June 2009

another 10 your writing is amazing!

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Ashraful Musaddeq 02 June 2009

'You can call it aquatic comlex- have I no objection, but why laying reckless blame of worshipping inanimate nature? ' A beautiful composition. I love the last stanza most. Idea of the poem is very nice. Cheers.

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Maya Hershey 01 June 2009

its brilliant..... its creative... full of life! ! i love this poem u deserve a 100 % 10+++++

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Shilesha Johnson 31 May 2009

wow this was such a great poem. i really enjoyed this. great write

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Harun Al Nasif

Harun Al Nasif

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