Nay, I am no worshiper of nature
but as I am a bubble
floating on this earthen heaven
I just could not shake off
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good job dear, simplicity makes a poem more beautiful and attractive..grace
i love how much u express things with ur words almost to make it like ur there! ! another great one! ! DLG
absaloutly beautifully put together. love the imagery words and how interesting you make the subject of something so simple. lovely read.
this is amazing, i never would have thought about a poem on water. they way you write makes it awsome, i'd give it a ten easily
'You can call it aquatic comlex- have I no objection, but why laying reckless blame of worshipping inanimate nature? ' A beautiful composition. I love the last stanza most. Idea of the poem is very nice. Cheers.
its brilliant..... its creative... full of life! ! i love this poem u deserve a 100 % 10+++++
wow this was such a great poem. i really enjoyed this. great write
Well expressed thoughts and feelings. Great lines nicely put together. A work of an intricate mind.