Saturday, February 28, 2009

Ode To The Worm Comments

Rating: 5.0

(with thanks to Mifael for reminding me that the worm
can be beautiful)
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Sonya Florentino
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Lillian Thomas 10 July 2009

nice one, only seemed like you were perhaps talking about a leach instead of a worm, though there are probably some parasitic worm that does these things. Anyway, good imagery. My favorite lines are: 'He has burrowed his way into my heart He has nestled in my soul'

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Saadat Tahir 29 June 2009

hi sonya...u must be an apple ;) very nice poem....different perspective...fresh well written cheers

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Ruth Walters 24 April 2009

Worms can be very friendly it seems and very comforting to have around. Come to think of it, in reality, if we didn't have worms in our gardens, they wouldn't be as fine. A brilliant take on love and well thought out. An interesting read, thankyou. Ruth: -)

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Laurie Hill 19 April 2009

What a wonderful tribute to Mifael. Such a loving write...10

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Mifael Llauderes 24 March 2009

with utter humility you are welcome and i thank you also... lovely piece.

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Manila, Philippines (residing NYC)
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