Tuesday, April 17, 2018

Ode To The Word, The Soul. Comments

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The river beside me, unmistakable sounds

The sun has just come out from the clouds
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Dawn Novus
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Thomas Plotz 30 September 2018

I love your uses of the word Dalliance - it is true; we do have almost a sexual relationship. Our oh so dear words we speak and read. It's exciting, enjoyable and stimulates our very being. - Thank you Dawn, most exquisite, My love for You has reached a new high, The height of which I cannot describe. Tom 105

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 28 April 2018

Wow sublime poem, eloquent wording. Wow newzealander poetess, u write superbly. Great love muse. Kudos I must say. Pleez do write your thoughts under my newest poem too, titled, dark skinned vs fair skin, I would love to hear your views

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George Krokos 17 April 2018

A nice poem Dawn with some good imagery in writing about your word. Keep at it.

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Dawn Novus 17 April 2018

Thank you George, for taking the time to read and comment on my poem.

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