Friday, October 2, 2009

Ode To The Wind Comments

Rating: 5.0

The wind whispered some words to me
In a language so elegant I cannot describe
I felt oddly sad sad and oddly in glee
But the words forever on my heart I inscribe
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vittal vandavasu
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V H Ferguson 13 October 2009

Very intense and moving - you describe so effectively! Wonderful, well done.

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Anusha Subramanian 06 October 2009

Hey Master.. With mind blowing thoughts and beautiful verses you bring in the depth of the poem.. Great write! ! Love it...! ! ! ! ! ! Cheers.. :)

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Chitra - 06 October 2009

a deep and intense spiritual journey..

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Anupama Raghavendran 04 October 2009

the last stanza was really gud! ! ! .....lovely description... :)

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 04 October 2009

WICKED EVER GREEN SORROW...LOVELY...A POEM WITH DEPTH AND MATURITY

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Robert Rorabeck 04 October 2009

good work- keep it up. Go Gandi! Peaceful resistance!

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Eyan Desir 02 October 2009

nice poem but again the words should flow more this is only my comments....

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Jerry Hughes 02 October 2009

..................nice bit of writing Vittal, well done. Cheers, Jerry

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Philip Winchester 02 October 2009

You my Young Friend are the master. No Bluff or disguise needed in your verse, Pure Raw Beautiful Verse, Gifted by the Guides and the God in which you trust. Take our praise and store it well, in an EGO proof box to show your other friends who may be in doubt as to your Supreme Class. Because you have it.

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Lady Grace 02 October 2009

very nice, , cheers...this is a very nice piece, , u r good enough to write such beautiful piece, , keep writing dear, , , always have confidence in your work, , , it's so nice..

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