The wind whispered some words to me
In a language so elegant I cannot describe
I felt oddly sad sad and oddly in glee
But the words forever on my heart I inscribe
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Hey Master.. With mind blowing thoughts and beautiful verses you bring in the depth of the poem.. Great write! ! Love it...! ! ! ! ! ! Cheers.. :)
the last stanza was really gud! ! ! .....lovely description... :)
WICKED EVER GREEN SORROW...LOVELY...A POEM WITH DEPTH AND MATURITY
nice poem but again the words should flow more this is only my comments....
..................nice bit of writing Vittal, well done. Cheers, Jerry
You my Young Friend are the master. No Bluff or disguise needed in your verse, Pure Raw Beautiful Verse, Gifted by the Guides and the God in which you trust. Take our praise and store it well, in an EGO proof box to show your other friends who may be in doubt as to your Supreme Class. Because you have it.
very nice, , cheers...this is a very nice piece, , u r good enough to write such beautiful piece, , keep writing dear, , , always have confidence in your work, , , it's so nice..
Very intense and moving - you describe so effectively! Wonderful, well done.