Saturday, February 23, 2013

Ode To The Sea Comments

Rating: 4.8

Oh sea of might;
You are a deity of light
As your fierce waves crash to the shore,
Then retreat; and return for more
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Aaryan Irani
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Rajnish Manga 24 February 2015

This is your own perception of the power of the sea but the way you have introduced Poseidon- the god of sea and thunder- (with his powerful trident) and Goddess Diana from the Greek mythology, makes it more vibrant and meaningful. Thanks.

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Mitul Shah 23 February 2013

Hey that's a great poem again beta... keep it up.. love always.. and always stay blessed! !

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Dave Walker 23 February 2013

A great poem, like it.

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Gajanan Mishra 23 February 2013

unending knowledge. I like it. thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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