Ode To The Salty Tear Comments
O' Salty tear, a mere clear drop that you are
You've emerged for a million different reasons
many of which only the shedder knows
for you've emerged in all seasons.
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A Powerful poem from your pen.. How come I missed this beautiful Ode to the Salty tear. Poem is very deep and with beautiful rhythms as well... This poem left me wondered whether Is it the salty tears were spilled from eyes? or is the the deep thoughts were spilled from your heart? Made this poem wonderful....
very nice poem with such deep emotions in it i love the rhythms, it sound so good good work and thanks for sharing
joy and grief two kinds of dirt that comes out from the heart, cleaning device those two and tears a sludge...well writ and rhymed thank
... wonderful poem... truly justified the title of the poem.... loved the way you wrote the lines...
very rhythmic... and beautifully written.. good work.. keep it up..
A very passionate ode replete with optimism, especially the last two lines: and be such a buddy who never wishes to meet again the tearful shedder from whom you depart!
Very very good, I love nicely writen poem especially those who contains a lot of rhythms.
Very nice picture of emotional tears. Great write! ! !
A wonderful poem. So true indeed... 'You've emerged for a million different reasons many of which only the shedder knows'
That's odd, why odd? Wel thanx poetess/poet stan, but im not a mr. as im a lassie, poetess.
Yours is indeed odd for an ode.. However it is extremely effective, peculiar rhyme-scheme notwithstanding. I give it a ten because throughout the sad poem brings me joy, utter joy. Great work, Mr. Kamoonpurii! !
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There must be something strangely sacred in salt. It is in our tears and in the sea. ” - Khalil Gibran a wonderful poem, kudos!
Great words on a emotion that is felt by most of us.....at times. Love how you put it into a poem... and thank you for your comment on my last poem... hopefully, my dad sees it in heaven.....
Love the title and more so the words and they way you have pieced them together. Thank You
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7/19/2025 11:18:16 AM # 1.0.0
It is a great ode to salty tears. Deep and vivid. Powerful expression. When tears will come and will emerge with the salty sea no one can say certainly. You have inscribed here touchingly... Ah but thou art' a ceaseless ocean in reserve and store No one can be sure, he'll cry no more When you trickle down those sad upturned lips we know destiny perhaps made those painful slips! Thanks for sharing.