Friday, October 16, 2009

Ode To The Ocean Comments

Rating: 4.8

The hot noon sun rises up,
And the dry leaves of the season drop,
Cigarette smoke and the smell of tobacco rise,
And the loud honk of the car cries.
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Aditya Mudbhary
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Fadwa Gmiden 20 November 2010

you have all what u need to be the best and your poems are amazing

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Allan Macli Borges 02 February 2010

i'm amazed with your poetry skill. the theme and the flowing of all is awesome.

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Joseph Poewhit 30 October 2009

Words give a dimension of something

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Obinna Eruchie 30 October 2009

Simple and interesting to read.

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Patrick A. Martin 18 October 2009

Sorry Eddie this is far to good a poem to present like this it needs a severe edit.

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Aditya Mudbhary

Aditya Mudbhary

Patan, Nepal
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