The hot noon sun rises up,
And the dry leaves of the season drop,
Cigarette smoke and the smell of tobacco rise,
And the loud honk of the car cries.
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i'm amazed with your poetry skill. the theme and the flowing of all is awesome.
Sorry Eddie this is far to good a poem to present like this it needs a severe edit.
you have all what u need to be the best and your poems are amazing