Thursday, October 22, 2009

Ode To The Oak Comments

Rating: 4.8

by shu ting

If I love you
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Rachel Gao
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Denis Mair 22 September 2017

There are a few mistakes in usage. For example, the word PART in the third line from the bottom should be APART. Even so, your words have good poetic feeling overall.

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Jazib Kamalvi 18 September 2017

A refined poetic imagination, Rachel. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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