There are a few mistakes in usage. For example, the word PART in the third line from the bottom should be APART. Even so, your words have good poetic feeling overall.
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There are a few mistakes in usage. For example, the word PART in the third line from the bottom should be APART. Even so, your words have good poetic feeling overall.