When i flit by the city,
Ennui; my motherland, the lee.
Through the faces of the boredom,
The serrates of hades in sum.
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Many many odes can be composed and addressed to mother's lap but still wont be able to encompass the affection there! ! ! yours is a beautiful effort! ! !
really an emotional poem as well as nice one...........the best place in this universe is a mother's lap for a child.. in absence of her everything seems low and colourless..........10 on 10 for this creation... i also invite to read my poems on maa..liketujhe bulaya..