Considering how poetry is seen
by those who read or write within its laws,
I see now that the average is mean,
and hear the constant sharpening of claws.
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We will find our own audience Linda. One way or another..; ¬) Danny.
And some of the greats simply move on to greener pastures. Sad, but true, wouldn't you say?
Nice one. I love the two last lines, they just made my moment
Nice one. I love the two last lines, they just made my moment
This is a handsome and metrically correct sonnet, Dan! Since perfection was the goal in this structure, allow me to suggest a minor alteration: The word watched contains two syllables. Eventually, it could be substituted by the word seen or even caught. Good morning, my friend!