Monday, July 10, 2017

Ode To The Master Of Flight (Haiku) Comments

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dart and hover,
pirouette the morning breeze
summer dragonfly
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Seamus O' Brian
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Bharati Nayak 19 July 2017

dart and hover, pirouette the morning breeze summer dragonfly curtsy to the wind your wings hum your thankful psalm your joy of flight our gift dance through morning's gold translucent silk fills your wings sun-pierced dragonfly living dragon kite no tether but my eyes in wonder we share this single joy - - - - - - - - Wow- - -What beauty in this short poem! ! ! !

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Glen Kappy 18 July 2017

hey, neal! nice! no surprise from you, i find words/phrases that delight me- pirouette curtsy to the wind dance through morning's gold translucent silk fills your wings living dragon kite- all of them consonant with my own experience of the dragonfly. glen

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Seamus O Brian 19 July 2017

Hi, Glen! Thanks for stopping by! Such beauty and complexity in even the simplest aspects of creation. All marvels of engineering and design. Be blessed, my friend!

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Captain Cur 10 July 2017

Who cannot enjoy the sight of these beautiful creatures, eloquently expressed in your write.

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