Ode To The Heart Comments

A wonderful heart felt write, well penned.

(cont.) The 'heart's' 2nd aspect, aka 'A characteristic or feature of something', is that as an imagined center of emotion, esp. 'love' or 'loss'

I will say I have a rather strong feeling that you should keep the two aspects of 'heart' separate, probably in separate poems. One aspect is its job of pumping blood. (CONT.)

I won't take time to leave as many comments as I have. You (with requests that I review other poems) and other things) keep me busy enough!

Starting and ending point of human life on earth, Superbly defined.

One of the best poem on heart, very informative and clever writing.

The heart leads; it is the mind/brain that follows. Fantastic verse, Asim!

however your size---------it ends'.No words for me yo express my joy reading your excellent poem.

Class ode to read.

Wonderful ode to read again.

Authoritative poem. I liked the minuscule details.

An inspiring write....very analytical too....it's a true fact that life begins with a heart and ends heartless...5*****

I really appreciate your time and efforts.

Thanks for review and comments.

Did I read this before? If not then I missed something very gr8.

Very informative and fabulous poem.

Clever writing, I liked the details.

Visited again to read this wonderful poem.

Is heart rule the body then this Holi is one of the best

Wonderful ode, today this is my second ode of yours.