Monday, February 25, 2013

Ode To The Candle Comments

Rating: 4.3

Dancing flames,
Queen of dames
Oh baton of light
In you presence darkness frights
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Aaryan Irani
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Mitul Shah 25 February 2013

Hey Aaryan... The odes to the owl and sea were much much better... But however a very good try... Keep it up.. and just relax and chill while you let the thoughts and words flow.. Voculbary is very good... Do use the gift of the pen that you have been bestowed with very very wisely.. Stay Blessed Beta..

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