Ode To The Boy In The Rain Comments

From my side 1000000++++++++

The abundance of color that swims behind your eyes- to expound on its infinitude, as i strain through smog in mine I can only try....good line

When the night shatters, & the world around us turns to white I'll press your trembling hands against my face, I'll hum your song til your breath grows soft I will always try....... fine poetry

Beautiful Poetry...my favorite line.. " " When the night shatters, & the world around us turns to white I'll press your trembling hands against my face, I'll hum your song til your breath grows soft I will always try" " " ... thanks

When the night shatters, & the world around us turns to white I'll press your trembling hands against my face, I'll hum your song til your breath grows soft IT IS THE HIGHEST TRIBUTE ONE PAYS TO A POETESS WHEN THE WORDS ARE SIMPLY QUOTED lady poetry tree