Sipping his drink
As he sits on the bed
Rubbing his eyes
And scratching his head
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Soooo clever, and it rhymes. Love this cuz i feel your pain cuz you describe it so beautifully.... I have never had a family member drink like this before, but i hope your're ok... Stay strong..
This is Great. I was going to write out my anger at your 'Men' poem as continuing the bashing Men so prevalent by women today. Noting that your you chose to not identify your gender, I looked further & read your bio & then this piece. - I've decide instead to compliment & acknowledge empathy for your courage to share your poems here & the therapeutic benefits that I just got as well. Thanks, (now I can let go the need to write a 'Women' version) : -)
A very vivid picture in this poem