Monday, September 14, 2015

Ode To Spring (Villanelle) Comments

Rating: 4.8

Soft shoots spring gently forth from the earth
They look to the sky with their open face
After the cold winter comes springs rebirth
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David Wood
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Dr Dillip K Swain 29 May 2023

I sincerely appreciate the poet's keen observation of nature! A fantastic ode.... loved it

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Amitava Sur 16 September 2015

Beautiful expression, ushering the spring with its hues and shine. Enjoyed a lot.

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Sanjukta Nag 14 September 2015

Marvellous work on villanelle. enjoyed the rhyming scheme very much...10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 14 September 2015

Marvellous expression. Wonderful imagery. Best poem on Spring. TFS. .....10

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M Asim Nehal 14 September 2015

Superb as ever.......Enjoyed reading your poem....

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