Friday, September 11, 2015

Ode To Spring (Terza Rima) Comments

Rating: 5.0

Spring gently breaths soft winds over still bare trees
Rustling last year’s dead leaves on still cold ground
It glides along paths floats over lakes with a soft ease
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David Wood
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Dr Dillip K Swain 11 May 2023

A fabulous ode.... loved it dear poet. Top score and to my favourites.

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Valsa George 11 September 2015

I can hear the brittle dry leaves getting crushed under my feet and see young plants pushing their way through the damp earth! Lovely descriptions! A 10

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Sanjukta Nag 11 September 2015

Natural beauty is dripping from the lines. magnificent.

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M Asim Nehal 11 September 2015

Outstanding poem............Loved it.......to quote from you own poem: Spring is where everything’s grows in the lengthening days..............Like your poems Where new life springs forth in a glorious colourful blaze..................Like your Haikus.

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