Thursday, May 22, 2008

Ode To Spiderman Comments

Rating: 5.0

The wallclimber is is is is is, mm, is is is, er, is is, ah,
Is at home again
Wished Auntie May recovered so asked Mephisto a spell.
So his wife Mary Jane went away,
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Paolo Giuseppe Mazzarello
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Reshma Ramesh 05 November 2008

amusing and warm......well penned sir.....

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Onelia Avelar 23 May 2008

Bravo Paolo :) This one is very cute - i can imagine a man retired superhero :) . It is just brilliant idea - end i really enjoy the end of the poem - as if a dog is retired, but the instinct is still there :) . Great one

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Original Unknown Girl 23 May 2008

I love the sense of fun and wit woven into the everyday here. Of course superheros still have an everyday life and you displayed that so well here. Well done - it was fun reading! HG: -) xx

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