You are the greatest and the finest
of all the creations.
Always capable of remaining busy
for the benefit of others,
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Yes, soil is life-giving. But at times it can take lives as well: landslide/mudslide; earthquake; quicksand; cave in; sinkhole Yikes! bri ;)
Dear Bri, Every thing has its positive and negative sides.I hope you would agree.Thanks for your comments.
I think you 'want' to use 'peace of mind', not 'piece of mind'. But I might about someone I'm upset with: 'I'll give her a piece of my mind! ' bri : )
A one of a kind Ode. Very encompassing. It expresses in beautiful and brilliant detail the importance and wonders of the Soil.
A lovely ode to the magnificent Mother Earth. Thank you for sharing such a nice poem....10
Equal piece of mind be read as equal peace of mind.typo error.
2) with endless patience it still exists, thanks to the great resilience it has acquired, a juwel of a poem 5 Stars full on TOP! I have enjoyed tremendously, Dr. Dash
!) Dearest ode ever, with a respectful heart I convey: this is the crystal-clear surrender of gratitude to the endless patience and resilience of the soil, on which all filth is poured, and still it nourishes,
A fantastic ode dear poet. Well penned.