Tuesday, April 19, 2011

Ode To Softball Comments

Rating: 5.0

BATTER UP!
My stomach feels on
fire as if it were
a volcano erupting.
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Evita Saldana
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Richard D. Remler 19 April 2011

Loved it! The short lines bring an easy flow here, and the poem is filled with action. A great write. Very well penned. tfs

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