Ode To Shells Comments

Wonderful poem Asim ji, Pick me up, and listen to me. I want you to hear my wants and desires.

Travelling across millions of waves we watch shore of tender perception. Lying lifeless on the shore provokes thought. Heat and cold both are perceived in seashore sand. But life is well nourished and protected by God and self effort. The destiny of life can be recognized soon by his grace. An interesting sharing is done here.10

Great question, fate and destiny both are answerable to it. Is this my destiny, lying on the seashore and Waiting for someone to pick me up.........

Great question, fate and destiny both are answerable to it. Is this my destiny, lying on the seashore and Waiting for someone to pick me up

Last line is amusing: I want you to hear my wants and desires. May be this is the reason why nobody wants to pick it up.

Pick me up and listen to me, lovely poem about a lonely shell

A deep philosophical and metaphoric poem. Well penned.

A beautiful ode! A structured poem with great philosophical depth! Appreciated the way it is penned my friend....10