Tuesday, April 18, 2023

Ode To Seashell. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Resting motionless on the coast of a seaside
a seashell that has journeyed for miles on the tide.

A voyage that only a few can comprehend
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M. Asim Nehal
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Darren Jkoeryo 20 April 2023

Excellent ode, to my fav.

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D.N. Rebb 20 April 2023

I'm looking in my fish tank and feeling guilty

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Sandra Feldman 20 April 2023

Totally carried away by this extraordinary poem's story and display. Travlled with its story, fascinatrd and mesmerized, participated like in a wonderful dream, A written reality of beauty, imagination and poetic stream. This is a poem for not only today but for Always!

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M. Asim Nehal 20 April 2023

Thank u so much, Sandra for your generous and wholehearted comment.

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Bharati Nayak 19 April 2023

It doesn't aspire to be a mere decoration in a tank pick it up and hear the untold tale that it has to bank.

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Bharati Nayak 19 April 2023

An amazing poem with great inspiration! Let me quote-'The harmonious melody that the shell holds within transcends the range of any instrument's din.'

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M. Asim Nehal 20 April 2023

Thank us so much Bharati Ji.

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Rajan T Renganathan 18 April 2023

Ever small creature on earth has some story to tell and this one is fantastic, creative and enjoyable. It doesn't aspire to be a mere decoration in a tank pick it up and hear the untold tale that it has to bank.

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Ricky Mangathen 18 April 2023

Awesome observation and nice ode to seashells, we only appreciate them when we see them near the sea, else who cares.

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M. Asim Nehal 20 April 2023

Thx much Ricky M

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