Ode To Sea Comments

'an apple bumps into me to be eaten, ' nicely expressed...the poem was really beginning to form up a nice picture but the end kind of turned that into a joke and humorous ending...But if you see the piece excluding the 'apple' part, or seeing the 'apple' from another point of view, it's an amazing piece! ! that's how i saw it...behind the curtains through the backstage! very cohesive with multiple meanings.