Saturday, May 25, 2013

Ode To Pirate Sun, Sea, Wind And Rain Comments

Rating: 5.0

Pleasant intermittent rhythms
voiceless smiles that transverse space
sunlight plays in raindrop prisms
each one falls to intrigue my face.
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Patricia Grantham 10 July 2013

Oh Captain, my Captain! This write bought a rush of adrenaline. Through your description of the elements and nature you took me to a place of complete relaxation in your poem. Written with beauty, rhyme and rhythm. Loved it.

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David Wood 01 June 2013

Very good rhyme & rythem. I loke this one very much.

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Unwritten Soul 31 May 2013

Ohhh Captain, you melt evening colors to fill in reader's heart...so we can feel all things, glad i am your crew so i can experienced this myself my captain _Soul

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Shahzia Batool 27 May 2013

imagination + observation + lexicon = your painting! ! !

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Chandra Thiagarajan 26 May 2013

Oh! What a beautiful poem describing the Sea Wind and Rain and the verses are alluring ! I read and re-read to completely comprehend the loveliness ! Thanks for sharing, Captain!

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