Tears of people of all ages
Soaking like ever patient sponges
The pillows imbibe life's essence...
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sooth or soothe? : " Sooth is a noun meaning truth. ...Soothe is a verb meaning to ease pain or to comfort." end of line 7: ! l oops? last line: " without" not " with out" ..in the U.S. anyway i think it's easier to be a pillow than a people-manager. :) bri ;)
A nice poem indeed about pillow. How it absorbs all the tears and sadness of a person when he goes to sleep. Very nicely done with a sweet rhyming and flow. Thanks.
i 'accidentally' came back here. and i see i've already been here & commented. i also see that you have acknowledged receipt of my comment (thanks) but you did not make any changes...yet. oh, well. that is for you to do or not. now i will go and let my pillow soak up my tears. bri :)
Thanks. I am unable to change. If possible, you may change and help me in this matter