Thursday, October 17, 2019

Ode To Pillows Comments

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Tears of people of all ages
Soaking like ever patient sponges
The pillows imbibe life's essence...
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Sheshu Babu
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Bri Edwards 09 December 2019

i 'accidentally' came back here. and i see i've already been here & commented. i also see that you have acknowledged receipt of my comment (thanks) but you did not make any changes...yet. oh, well. that is for you to do or not. now i will go and let my pillow soak up my tears. bri :)

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Sheshu Babu 09 December 2019

Thanks. I am unable to change. If possible, you may change and help me in this matter

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Sheshu Babu 19 November 2019

An inspiration from great poets like Wordsworth

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Bri Edwards 20 October 2019

sooth or soothe? : " Sooth is a noun meaning truth. ...Soothe is a verb meaning to ease pain or to comfort." end of line 7: ! l oops? last line: " without" not " with out" ..in the U.S. anyway i think it's easier to be a pillow than a people-manager. :) bri ;)

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Sheshu Babu 10 November 2019

Thank u for correction and reading. It was a typo mistake

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Shesh Babu 20 October 2019

Thank u very much Anil Kumar Panda ji

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Anil Kumar Panda 20 October 2019

A nice poem indeed about pillow. How it absorbs all the tears and sadness of a person when he goes to sleep. Very nicely done with a sweet rhyming and flow. Thanks.

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Sheshu Babu 10 November 2019

Thanks a lot...!

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Thomson trup 18 October 2019

Innovative and true....

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Ridley 18 October 2019

Nice and fantastic..

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Babul 18 October 2019

Wow.... Great

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Lenin rao 17 October 2019

Oh Oh Oh Oh Another interesting piece

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Patrick brownsky 17 October 2019

Fine expressive poem....

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Jones 17 October 2019

Good one A poem of importance

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G . S. Gundu 17 October 2019

Oh A great tribute to pillows...

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