Wednesday, April 11, 2012

Ode To Panthers Comments

Rating: 2.3

Fur that blackens the sun
So swift, so sleek, so divine.
The knowledge of its presence
Crawls up your spine
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Khairul Ahsan 01 April 2014

For a 9th grade student, I must say, the poem is very well written. I wonder who has rated this poem only 1/10. I am the second to vote. 'The knowledge of its presence Crawls up your spine' - Well said. 'They will shake you to your core If you're their prey you'll be no more.' - True!

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