FED UP with Marital Imprisonment
Said 'Bye! ' to his warden and..off he went.
His bossy bride cried '' What a nerve!
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I often dream of being without clothes, think it reflects vulnerability. I love this Dee, commented before. Your poems are always full of fun and I love your old fashioned style.Cheers
A great funny poem Dee, you like your rhythm and rhyme too. I love rhyme. Thats where your talent lies.Keep it up.x
To be naked that day...It turned out to pay. He did so get his sweetness in life... But only after he had left his wife. Sweet nice things happen to those who try other temptations on the menu of life's happiness. A varied flavor to consume and savor. Sweetly and nicely writ...So much humor and talented wit! I'd have to give this fare a ten. God bless and best regards-Michael Jeffrey Gale.
Deanna What incredable characters you come up with, all I can say is this is just True Gritt brilliant work cheers Sylvie
MOST ENJOYABLE PIECE, , , TITLE A TAD ''EYE-CATCHING TO BOOT... WOULD MAKE FOR SOME AWESOME LYRICALS...LONG POEM, BUT STRUCTURED CRAFTMANSHIP FROM BOW TO STERN... A TEN FOR YE WHO GET CAUGHT NAKED... '''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''~F. J. R.~''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''
But it worked for him, Deanna! Had a good laugh at this one. Love, Fran xx
There is no score to givethis other than a 10. It was very creative and very well written as a poem. I found no flaws, only laughter. GW62