Wednesday, May 17, 2006

Ode To Nakedness Comments

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FED UP with Marital Imprisonment
Said 'Bye! ' to his warden and..off he went.
His bossy bride cried '' What a nerve!
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Judith Driscoll Bryan
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Greenwolfe 1962 30 June 2008

There is no score to givethis other than a 10. It was very creative and very well written as a poem. I found no flaws, only laughter. GW62

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Lisa Wilkinson 10 March 2007

I often dream of being without clothes, think it reflects vulnerability. I love this Dee, commented before. Your poems are always full of fun and I love your old fashioned style.Cheers

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Lisa Wilkinson 02 June 2006

A great funny poem Dee, you like your rhythm and rhyme too. I love rhyme. Thats where your talent lies.Keep it up.x

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Michael Gale 01 June 2006

To be naked that day...It turned out to pay. He did so get his sweetness in life... But only after he had left his wife. Sweet nice things happen to those who try other temptations on the menu of life's happiness. A varied flavor to consume and savor. Sweetly and nicely writ...So much humor and talented wit! I'd have to give this fare a ten. God bless and best regards-Michael Jeffrey Gale.

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Sylvia Spencer 19 May 2006

Deanna What incredable characters you come up with, all I can say is this is just True Gritt brilliant work cheers Sylvie

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MOST ENJOYABLE PIECE, , , TITLE A TAD ''EYE-CATCHING TO BOOT... WOULD MAKE FOR SOME AWESOME LYRICALS...LONG POEM, BUT STRUCTURED CRAFTMANSHIP FROM BOW TO STERN... A TEN FOR YE WHO GET CAUGHT NAKED... '''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''~F. J. R.~''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''

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Tracey Collins 18 May 2006

Amen to that if your naked at the door you will get rewards.

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Francesca Johnson 18 May 2006

But it worked for him, Deanna! Had a good laugh at this one. Love, Fran xx

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Judith Driscoll Bryan

Judith Driscoll Bryan

Halifax, Nova Scotia, Canada
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