Sunday, December 28, 2008

Ode To My Woodsman Comments

Rating: 5.0

Feeling lonely and unloved
I took a friends advice
I surfed the net until I met
A man I could admire
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Laurena Pamela Willetts
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Anthony Edmond John 15 January 2009

The searched depth of a woman's heart.. sweet and salient lines mama..cheers and compliments of the season. The Sage Anthony Edmond John +2348020984990

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Ron Flowers 09 January 2009

A good poem, Laurena. A real pleasure to read Ron

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Vinod Kumar 05 January 2009

There are two methods a human being activities, one is desire the Brain and the other is obey the Heart, This is really come from your pleasent Heart like a crystal clear cascade, Thanks a lot for the poem, Good 2009.

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Jerry Hughes 04 January 2009

Pretty good first attempt Laurena, try it in free verse experimentally. Best, Jerry

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Goran Gustafsson 31 December 2008

Cyberspace flirt is a tricky business

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pied piper 31 December 2008

This is a truly heartfelt and beautiful piece. Well penned. Internet relationships can be tricky. As with all relationships, but I think internet relationships are harder. We miss so much without being able too see attitudes and expressions. Body language means a lot, and online it we can all be mistaken easily in our perception of the written word. Well penned. I gave it a 10

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Vaibhav Pandey 30 December 2008

very passionate poem. I lovrd it.

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Sanya Zahid 29 December 2008

An excellent thought of expressing how you feel.

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 28 December 2008

A passionate writing for the Woodman lost in the forest of misunderstanding. May he realize and understand your words and come back to your life one day!

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Laurena Pamela Willetts

Laurena Pamela Willetts

south wales u.k.
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