Feeling lonely and unloved
I took a friends advice
I surfed the net until I met
A man I could admire
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There are two methods a human being activities, one is desire the Brain and the other is obey the Heart, This is really come from your pleasent Heart like a crystal clear cascade, Thanks a lot for the poem, Good 2009.
Pretty good first attempt Laurena, try it in free verse experimentally. Best, Jerry
This is a truly heartfelt and beautiful piece. Well penned. Internet relationships can be tricky. As with all relationships, but I think internet relationships are harder. We miss so much without being able too see attitudes and expressions. Body language means a lot, and online it we can all be mistaken easily in our perception of the written word. Well penned. I gave it a 10
A passionate writing for the Woodman lost in the forest of misunderstanding. May he realize and understand your words and come back to your life one day!
The searched depth of a woman's heart.. sweet and salient lines mama..cheers and compliments of the season. The Sage Anthony Edmond John +2348020984990