Ode To My Son Comments
My son, erase the word totally
People usually say, "Failure"
From the very dictionary
You always look over;
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My son, erase the word totally People usually say, Failure From the very dictionary You always look over;
Then attempt a more For being real success gainer In legal way for the both lives And for the both purposes;
Both lives and purposes are Here and hereafter whole As you are made the owner Of a life with the immortal soul.
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7/20/2025 9:21:39 AM # 1.0.0
Erasing a word cannot be called as failure rather it is an art of learning. Erasing one word he is learning more new words. This is great that he understands the purpose of immortal soul. This is an excellently penned poem.10
Sir, in this poem I have advised my son to erase the word, Failure from his dictionary to succeed in life, .................... in both life worldly and spiritually; here and hereafter, .................... and they must know the purposes of life and soul, .................. thank you sir for your wisely comments, I always respect your comments