Thursday, March 1, 2018

Ode To My Niece Comments

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O' my daughter, my sweetest child
My unseen heaven - Look at me, now, just now
You take birth in this world
This time is precious to me
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Dr Dillip K Swain 28 December 2022

A beautiful ode! Loved the lovely expression, 'O' my elegant fairy, look at the garden All roses blossom for your coming today Marigolds are smiling with butterfly Sunflowers are playing with vanished sun...'. Full marks.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 11 December 2018

The ever best mother goddess of beauty I've seen No pearl, no diamond, no Kohinoor Nothing can compare to you All are bogus to your unseen beauty into me Without you no beautiful princess is true.....nice poetic expression. It is a beautiful ode to your niece. Thanks for sharing.

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Britte Ninad 13 August 2018

Beautifully tribute to your niece

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