Ode To My Muse: The World Is Round Comments

Very well done. I enjoyed your use of images and description appealing to so many of the senses. The first image we always notice first is the human face. It is fitting that you begin with the eyes, the most revealing part of the human face. Your repetition of “lips” four times is very effective. Gets us back on track. The ending is very inventive.

This is passion. But I have to read the last line again (amd maybe again)

Yes! ! ! We all feel it...but to write about it can't be only for the person who makes you feel that way...we need to feel it, to see it...and you did a wonderful job of describing your feelings in a way we can relate to, and envy...nice write...Coach