Friday, July 27, 2018

Ode To My Melina Comments

Rating: 5.0

Your smile is piercing my heart with its loving radiance.
Patting a rhythmical pattern with total excitation
Your enthusiasm is contagious as you take upon your dance
gliding with an emotional cascade in complete relaxation.
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Kumarmani Mahakul 15 May 2020

Her smile is piercing your heart with its loving radiance. Your granddaughter Melina is much affectionate and you have penned an excellent ode poem for her...10

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Bernadette Meessen 13 March 2019

Hi Paul, This sounds like a small child. It she your grandchild? It must be great having you as a Granddad..

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Paul Amrod

Paul Amrod

Chateaugay, New York
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