Saturday, March 14, 2015

Ode To My Love Comments

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I will never forget how much you meant to me,
I will never forget how you make my heart feel,
I will never forget how your eyes open up your soul to me,
I will never forget how you presence calms and reassures me.
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Patricia Clarke
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Chinedu Dike 15 March 2015

Beautiful train of thoughts, well articulated, nicely encapsulated and subtly penned from inner recesses of the heart. A lovely piece of poetry penned with insight. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Khairul Ahsan 14 March 2015

I've just read your beautiful poem. It's so nice! The title of the poem is apt and the note at the end is explanatory. But why did you call it 'forbidden love'? The feelings seem to be genuine. One can have these kind of feelings only when one is 'in love'.

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Patricia Clarke 15 March 2015

Thank you for reading my poem and commenting. I refer to it as forbidden love because while the love is genuine, it cannot be acted upon or enjoyed.

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