On the full moon night when the tide rises
And they follow one after another
I feel something in my heart
And my cheek feels million kisses.
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Though our soul dwells in two bodies And Heart resides in two parts We live in each other's sorrow and happiness We are inseparable, like water and the fish. Superb Verse! Top stars for sure.
Enjoyable ode to your love. I admire your love poems. Truly fabulous.
A fabulous ode to love... captivating poetic expression... appreciated.5 stars
Sir this is a very beautiful ode. So welll captured the emotions in words. The closing like inseperable like water and fish is magnificent. It reminds me of children poem machli jal ki rani hai..jeevan uska paani hai....
To my favourite list. Such a soothing poem.