Tuesday, April 20, 2021

Ode To My Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

On the full moon night when the tide rises
And they follow one after another
I feel something in my heart
And my cheek feels million kisses.
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M. Asim Nehal
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Suzon Albert 24 April 2021

To my favourite list. Such a soothing poem.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 23 April 2021

Though our soul dwells in two bodies And Heart resides in two parts We live in each other's sorrow and happiness We are inseparable, like water and the fish. Superb Verse! Top stars for sure.

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Deepak S S 22 April 2021

Enjoyable ode to your love. I admire your love poems. Truly fabulous.

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Zoyza Da Vinka 21 April 2021

Perfect ode to your love. Great metaphor and similes.

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Sunprincess* 21 April 2021

Marvellous poem.

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Sunprincess* 21 April 2021

Excellent ode to your love.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 21 April 2021

A fabulous ode to love... captivating poetic expression... appreciated.5 stars

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Varsha M 21 April 2021

Sir this is a very beautiful ode. So welll captured the emotions in words. The closing like inseperable like water and fish is magnificent. It reminds me of children poem machli jal ki rani hai..jeevan uska paani hai....

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Kostas Lagos 21 April 2021

Like water and the fish... Brilliant

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M. Asim Nehal

M. Asim Nehal

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