Monday, May 14, 2007

Ode To My Gallstones... Comments

Rating: 5.0

You have sat inside my belly
for so long now
it seems as if
you have become a part of me...
...
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COMMENTS
Brian Dorn 16 May 2007

Great stuff, Sandy... very cleverly done. Possibly your best work to date... unique and brilliantly inventive! ! Brian

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Alison Cassidy 15 May 2007

Sandy you reveal so much of yourself in this honest, self-deprecating piece about pain and life and acceptance. Bless this beautiful doctor man who has the courage to care. I look forward to sharing the new Sandy minus balls! love, Allie xxxx

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Sidi Mahtrow 14 May 2007

Separation is such sweet sorrow. But how will you feel tomorrow? When the pain is gone Does that mean you're all alone? No more cares A new life, not like before, Nothing of which to beware, Yet the apprehension will be there. Like a stray cat or dog that returns Unless your living style changes one learns That gall stones are a product of your own transgressions That build and build until they have certain dimensions Then they send a message loud and clear WE'RE BACK, HOPE YOU DIDN'T MISS US, DEAR! s

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