The poems your fingers paint in air
is beyond my minds comprehensiveness -
yet electrifies everything around you.
The words you utter is unfound in any
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a good one... personally i dont like use of words as 'dictionary' in a poem...but doesnt matter much if the poem ends beautifully.... This one did :)
I am waiting for all these to happen so come soon oh child o mine.....sure, you will be blessed....my wishes
A great vivid write..awesome poem..it has the passion and ingredients of a nice poetry...10
no words could describe how amazing this piece is! ! ! ! ! keep up the great work! ! ~joya~
beautiful imagery you used here.And there is the value of waiting patiently.A nice write. And a good poem.I love it. Hugs, meggie
very unique piece f writing you have here. I have to love it.
This poem is quite simply beautiful....it brings out warmth, love and great feeling 10+
This was an outstanding writing. It had love, truth, and beauty. These are the things that make for great poetry. It was a pleasure to read this, clearly from a very creative mind. GW62
this one was great just keep it up nothing wrong with this one its was amazing 9+
a good one... personally i dont like use of words as 'dictionary' in a poem...but doesnt matter much if the poem ends beautifully.... This one did :)