Wednesday, March 25, 2009

Ode To My Child Comments

Rating: 5.0

The poems your fingers paint in air
is beyond my minds comprehensiveness -
yet electrifies everything around you.
The words you utter is unfound in any
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Putholi Arumugham T
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Aparna Sinha 12 July 2009

a good one... personally i dont like use of words as 'dictionary' in a poem...but doesnt matter much if the poem ends beautifully.... This one did :)

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Aparna Sinha 12 July 2009

a good one... personally i dont like use of words as 'dictionary' in a poem...but doesnt matter much if the poem ends beautifully.... This one did :)

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Indira Renganathan 22 May 2009

I am waiting for all these to happen so come soon oh child o mine.....sure, you will be blessed....my wishes

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Sarah Childers 29 April 2009

It was so happy and perfectly beautiful, I love it.

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looking forward for a live poem...good

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Ency Bearis 11 April 2009

A great vivid write..awesome poem..it has the passion and ingredients of a nice poetry...10

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Joya Feghaly 11 April 2009

no words could describe how amazing this piece is! ! ! ! ! keep up the great work! ! ~joya~

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Reshma Ramesh 03 April 2009

wow.....the descriptions are amazing

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Meggie Gultiano 01 April 2009

beautiful imagery you used here.And there is the value of waiting patiently.A nice write. And a good poem.I love it. Hugs, meggie

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very unique piece f writing you have here. I have to love it.

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Sandra Martyres 28 March 2009

This poem is quite simply beautiful....it brings out warmth, love and great feeling 10+

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Greenwolfe 1962 28 March 2009

This was an outstanding writing. It had love, truth, and beauty. These are the things that make for great poetry. It was a pleasure to read this, clearly from a very creative mind. GW62

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Christina Phan 28 March 2009

this one was great just keep it up nothing wrong with this one its was amazing 9+

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