Friday, March 14, 2008

Ode To Moon Comments

Rating: 5.0

Ah! Mysterious Moon!
Why do you come every night
And spread your cool dim light?
Your beauty is for us a consecration
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vaibhav shah
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C. P. Sharma 21 May 2008

You provide a ne dimension to look at the moon. Traditionally: Moon is meant for children's delight, Moon is for love's fancy flight, On moonlit nights there is love tide, Moon stands for enchanting bride. Moon cols down an agitated mind, It provides you the peace of mind.

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Deepti Agarwal 22 April 2008

gone thru many poems for THE MOON.... this one is cool...especially the last line..it did all the wonders... :)

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Abha Sharma 21 March 2008

charming treat to 'Chanda Mama' enjoyed reading it

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Seema Chowdhury 17 March 2008

hi Vaibah, its a good poem, very nicely it expresses your feelings. always remember the one that comes from the heart always touches the heart. just keep on writing and make sure your poetry will touch it highest level only when it will have a touch of sincerity and purity. take care and enjoy your poetic life. seema

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