Tired Mary, mouth so parched,
To Bethlehem you had marched,
Husband Joseph by your side,
Attending well his blessed bride.
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Blessed is the Mary who was instrumental in bringing the son of God on earth....a good write.....
Oh my Alf! this is a beautiful 'Ode To Mary'I enjoyed the narrative...the rhyming words filled my heart with joy as the holidays are near.A 10+++
Oh my Alf! this is a beautiful 'Ode To Mary'I enjoyed the narrative...the rhyming words filled my heart with joy as the holidays are near.A 10+++
we must go through the mother, before we see the son for without her there is none. PRAISE MOTHER MARY. A TEN
yeah, she is the one who keeps the hard fire in her womb she is the one who keeps the lord on praise to her and her son thanks for a great and wonderful poem luwi
Lovely poem in rhyme. So flowing and well written, and of course appropriate for the coming time of year. Another 10 from me. Best Steve
Filled with vibrant faith this poem really sings - - well written throughout - - Fay
i always like poems that are based on religious thoughts, beliefs and characters. its very nicely composed and explained. thanks for sharing. take care
a fitting tribute to a beloved Lady and mother of God. We always come to her to ask for her intercession and she never fails us. I love her, my children love her very much. thank you for giving thid wonderful tribute to our Lady.
The lord is our sheppard we shall not want your poem really gives the message luvli to read Alf +++++10 regards
Filled with vibrant faith this poem really sings.... well written throughout... Fay
Praise the Lord for Mary's Obedience. This is a stirring poem as we approach the soon coming of our king. It is so important to find the purpose of one's life. Mary did just that and I believe you have as well
A beautiful poem with religious thoughts..like an Ode to Mary....10
The Son of God and the praise of His Glory...a nice poem with an emotional religious value to it
A lovely poem now that Christmas is upon us once more. Beautifully thought out and written. A moving piece. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX
Poem that sings the praise of Virgin Mother...Joseph was destined there to share the Light she conceived...the Son Of God as Light good poem on the Biblical lines, Alf...thanks...10
All creation needed a womb of a mother. Mother Mary had the son of God. How fortunate is to be a mother like Mary