Wednesday, April 2, 2008
Ode To Gardners Comments
Rating: ★4.5
Plants and flowers,
Shrubs and trees
Warmed by the sunshine,
Kissed by the bees.
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9/14/2025 8:49:55 PM # 1.0.0
Carolyn - nice work on Ode to Gardeners! One suggestion - use the active instead of passive voice Dropping us faithfully To our knees.................passive We dropp faithfully To our knees................active Just a thought! Usually the active indicates action, doing something Perhaps though you are overcome by the breeze and brought to your knees by its emotional power?