Her vassalage henceforth I am condemned
A saintly visage adorned both sweetly
Coated twice on gilded vines stemmed
Great her presence filmed and veil’d completely
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I really liked this poem. I think the tone works very well with the flow of the poem and the wording is something not seen as much lately. Great job!
very well penned. i like your style of writing.