Friday, April 23, 2010

Ode To Eternity Comments

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Her vassalage henceforth I am condemned

A saintly visage adorned both sweetly

Coated twice on gilded vines stemmed

Great her presence filmed and veil’d completely

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Beach Leanbh
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Megan Anderton 25 September 2011

very well penned. i like your style of writing.

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Olivia Helmes 23 April 2010

I really liked this poem. I think the tone works very well with the flow of the poem and the wording is something not seen as much lately. Great job!

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