To be a childhood star
Knowing you've surpassed the bar
To see the moon beyond the sky
Totally sober and not high
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Excellent brevity, enjoyed reading this time and again, now again, I keep All the STARS in the Galaxy for you, dear Richard. My two thumbs up for YOU
It's a great honour to have a poetess of your stature reread my poetry. To keep all those stars for me...so very heartwarming and brightening. My dear friend Sylvia, I can't thank you enough for all of your support and encouragement!
My today's response on your comment: Deepest bowing for you, thank YOU, dear Richard
THX very much for the positive appraisal, Anjandev. Happy that you enjoyed it. Are you a Drake fan?
Dillip, I can't thank you enough for your support of this poem. You are motivating me to find the courage to send it to Drake!
A fantastic Ode! My favorite lines, 'To hear the music beyond song/Truly trusting you haven't gone wrong'. Just brilliant.
To hear the music beyond the song... fantastic. A fabulous ode that gives me immense pleasure to revisit. Great! !
Always a great honour when a highly esteemed poet revisits my poetry. I'm so happy that you love this poem so much, Dillip. THX so much for making my day!
A fabulous ode! My favorite stanza, 'To touch all that is pure love And have sense of the above To taste glorious victory And still remain loyal and free' Top core and to my favorite.
Dillip, you seem to be quite enamoured with my first POD. Sincerest thx for your continued support and encouragement!
OR...maybe: 'During his time, Sir Francis Drake was known in England as an expert sailor, adventurer, privateer, navigator, and war hero. The Spanish, however, viewed him as an illegal trader of enslaved people and a ruthless pirate.' bri : )
'Paul Drake is a fictional private detective in the Perry Mason series of murder mystery novels by Erle Stanley Gardner' Ok, I'd better read the poem now. ;)
A wonderful tribute, well written with rhyme and meter, It flows off the tongue and has a beat. Well done
Very meaningful comments to me, soren because some of my poems are written as songs. But I'm not a musician, so I don't know if I'm on the right path. Thx!
To be the one and only Drake Knowing you've never been a fake To rise beyond the star so bright Keeping bang-up values in sight. Really marvellous
A wonderful tribute written with clarity of thought and mind. A insightful work of art beautifully embellished with poetic rhyme and rhythm. Thanks for sharing, my friend.
Lately, he's been going on a wayward path. Hopefully, he'll get back on track soon! Leeann, thank you so much for visiting!
To touch all that is pure love/And have sense of the above/To taste glorious victory/And still remain loyal and free.....lovely expression! My pleasure reading this wonderful piece of work time and again!
To have an esteemed fellow poet read one's poetry time and again is a huge honour. Thank you so very much, Dillip.
My favorite lines: To touch all that is pure love/And have sense of the above/To taste glorious victory/And still remain loyal and free……..One of the finest odes of modern era my dear friend..Thanks for sharing!
Terrific poem, Richard. And congratulations on the Poem of the Day.
A magnificent Ode! My favourite lines, 'To be the one and only/Drake Knowing you've never been a fake/To rise beyond the star so bright/Keeping bang-up values in sight'
Dr Swain, it's always an honour when you revisit my poems and positively comment on them. You really liking this one so much may give me the impetus to send it to Drake.