Friday, August 12, 2016

Ode To Drake Comments

Rating: 4.8

To be a childhood star
Knowing you've surpassed the bar
To see the moon beyond the sky
Totally sober and not high
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Richard Wlodarski
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Dr Dillip K Swain 14 March 2023

A magnificent Ode! My favourite lines, 'To be the one and only/Drake Knowing you've never been a fake/To rise beyond the star so bright/Keeping bang-up values in sight'

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Richard Wlodarski 14 March 2023

Dr Swain, it's always an honour when you revisit my poems and positively comment on them. You really liking this one so much may give me the impetus to send it to Drake.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 12 March 2023

Excellent brevity, enjoyed reading this time and again, now again, I keep All the STARS in the Galaxy for you, dear Richard. My two thumbs up for YOU

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Richard Wlodarski 12 March 2023

It's a great honour to have a poetess of your stature reread my poetry. To keep all those stars for me...so very heartwarming and brightening. My dear friend Sylvia, I can't thank you enough for all of your support and encouragement!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 23 March 2023

My today's response on your comment: Deepest bowing for you, thank YOU, dear Richard

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Anjandev Roy 03 March 2023

Excellent piece....... enjoyed.....thanks a lot....

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Richard Wlodarski 03 March 2023

THX very much for the positive appraisal, Anjandev. Happy that you enjoyed it. Are you a Drake fan?

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Good one. Top score for the lovely

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Richard Wlodarski 03 March 2023

THX very much, Poet Menon.

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Richard Wlodarski 18 November 2022

Dillip, I can't thank you enough for your support of this poem. You are motivating me to find the courage to send it to Drake!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 17 November 2022

A fantastic Ode! My favorite lines, 'To hear the music beyond song/Truly trusting you haven't gone wrong'. Just brilliant.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 30 August 2022

To hear the music beyond the song... fantastic. A fabulous ode that gives me immense pleasure to revisit. Great! !

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Richard Wlodarski 31 August 2022

Always a great honour when a highly esteemed poet revisits my poetry. I'm so happy that you love this poem so much, Dillip. THX so much for making my day!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 05 June 2022

A fantastic ode, touching expression. Loved it.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 05 June 2022

Typo: Top score

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Dr Dillip K Swain 05 June 2022

A fabulous ode! My favorite stanza, 'To touch all that is pure love And have sense of the above To taste glorious victory And still remain loyal and free' Top core and to my favorite.

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Richard Wlodarski 05 June 2022

Dillip, you seem to be quite enamoured with my first POD. Sincerest thx for your continued support and encouragement!

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Bri Edwards 10 May 2022

OR...maybe: 'During his time, Sir Francis Drake was known in England as an expert sailor, adventurer, privateer, navigator, and war hero. The Spanish, however, viewed him as an illegal trader of enslaved people and a ruthless pirate.' bri : )

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Or...maybe...just maybe: Drake the singer?

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Bri Edwards 10 May 2022

'Paul Drake is a fictional private detective in the Perry Mason series of murder mystery novels by Erle Stanley Gardner' Ok, I'd better read the poem now. ;)

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I used to watch Perry Mason faithfully!

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soren Barrett 25 April 2022

A wonderful tribute, well written with rhyme and meter, It flows off the tongue and has a beat. Well done

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Richard Wlodarski 25 April 2022

Very meaningful comments to me, soren because some of my poems are written as songs. But I'm not a musician, so I don't know if I'm on the right path. Thx!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 23 March 2023

Sure, YOU ARE, dear Richard

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To be the one and only Drake Knowing you've never been a fake To rise beyond the star so bright Keeping bang-up values in sight. Really marvellous

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Luo Zhihai 20 December 2020

To touch all that is pure love We need love!

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Chinedu Dike 10 November 2019

A wonderful tribute written with clarity of thought and mind. A insightful work of art beautifully embellished with poetic rhyme and rhythm. Thanks for sharing, my friend.

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Leeann Azzopardi 06 January 2019

oh how true those words ring

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Richard Wlodarski 07 January 2019

Lately, he's been going on a wayward path. Hopefully, he'll get back on track soon! Leeann, thank you so much for visiting!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 06 August 2018

To touch all that is pure love/And have sense of the above/To taste glorious victory/And still remain loyal and free.....lovely expression! My pleasure reading this wonderful piece of work time and again!

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Richard Wlodarski 19 September 2018

To have an esteemed fellow poet read one's poetry time and again is a huge honour. Thank you so very much, Dillip.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 15 January 2018

My favorite lines: To touch all that is pure love/And have sense of the above/To taste glorious victory/And still remain loyal and free……..One of the finest odes of modern era my dear friend..Thanks for sharing!

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Richard Wlodarski 25 February 2018

That's a huge compliment! Thank you so much, Dillip!

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Mj Lemon 24 September 2017

Terrific poem, Richard. And congratulations on the Poem of the Day.

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Richard Wlodarski 29 September 2017

M.J., thank you for thinking that it's terrific.

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