Wednesday, May 22, 2013

Ode To Complacency Comments

Rating: 5.0

You rest on bed of reeds like an autumn leaf
Never with winds you go, no quiver, no trill
Stretch in comfort and breathe with a sigh of relief
Sleep in a shell, a world your own void of thrill
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Yasmin Khan
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Captain Cur 30 May 2013

What a wonderfully crafted poem. I am lying on my ship having a tug of rum, and realize this poem was written for me. Excellent presentation, a great read.

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David Wood 30 May 2013

a lovely ode deep in philosophy.

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Shahzia Batool 28 May 2013

Waters dull reflect neither image nor sparkling waves a lively write, stirring and inviting, Jasmeen!

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Payal Parande 26 May 2013

Poetry is the art of uniting pleasure with truth...a beautiful piece... Thank you for sharing ma'am

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Valsa George 26 May 2013

This is indeed terrific! A wonderful Ode, deep in philosophy and sophisticated in narration!

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 24 May 2013

nice to read and complacent souls a satisfied lot may be saint I will read again peace fully it deserves perfect 10

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Wahab Abdul 22 May 2013

i have read ode to autumn, nightingale etc here i see ode to complacency, an ode on abstract things, you must have worked hard, and you mind is has a philosophical bend.. i love the poem too much bravo..10..

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