Wednesday, July 4, 2018

Ode To Books Comments

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Ode To Books

My glasses lay ‘pon open book
Whilst I give my eyes a respite
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David Whalen
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Bri Edwards 30 July 2018

(cont.) Your last stanza is my favorite! zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz to MyPoemList. bri :)

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Bri Edwards 30 July 2018

1st line: i believe English textbooks would (still) say use lie, not lay. ha ha. some favorite lines: Provide them a bed in my weary head Each paragraph, phrase and sentence AND: Have helped to ease an elders fears As Summer wine soothes the mind i'm picturing you in a comfy chair with wine and book; i forego/forgo** the wine. but, elder's. ** i checked definition and found there are 'variant' spellings! ! (cont.)

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Kim Barney 04 July 2018

I also love books. You have done a fine job with this ode and I really enjoyed reading it. Thanks for posting.

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