Thursday, July 26, 2018

Ode To An Unknown Friend Comments

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Ode to an Unknown Friend

Yesterday I came across 'Dream'
It was so real and delight,
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Devanshu Patel
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Aniruddha Pathak 21 August 2019

Apart from the unique experience, let me say something about the way this poem is writ. I liked the way the first line is repeated except for one new word, and then completing the rhyming quatrain around it. Marvellous, dear poet, top marks

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Bharati Nayak 09 August 2018

Some experiences are dream like- - - -Social media have reduced distances and brought people of far distances come nearer- - - - -the surprise of experiencing friendship and love for some one unknown is quite natural because of its suddenness - - - -A beautiful poem, thanks for sharing.

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Valsa George 26 July 2018

Enjoyed this beautifully rhyming poem on Friendship and Love inspired by a surprise message from an unknown friend! Such things can suddenly bright up our life and give it a sudden lift! A 10

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Devanshu Patel

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Kapadwanj, Gujarat (India)
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