Friday, December 25, 2015

Ode To An Electrocuted! Comments

Rating: 4.5

Like a withered flower
Thou were lying there
On a wooden bier for ever
An electrocuted immature.
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R.K.S. Yadav
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Ajay Kumar Adarsh 27 August 2016

nice poem. Poem carrying emotions with good motion....n producing great message.... awesome.... Men are taught by Nature Time and tide waits never Whether present, past or future.

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Rajkamal P.j 15 March 2016

A commendable flow of words. Congrats.

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Rajnish Manga 30 January 2016

A very poignant description indeed. The poem brings about the emotional aspect of the situation in the backdrop of a death due to elecrocution. Thanks. Men are taught by Nature Time and tide waits never

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Ratnakar Mandlik 25 December 2015

Excellent portrayal of the electrocuted penned. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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