Friday, June 6, 2008

Ode To An American Girl Comments

Rating: 5.0

The building is at the top of the way, that of the few elegant shops.
In semi-darkness the stairs smell of scented low cost cleansing agent,
So those stairs are neither scented nor clean, in the Liberty style.
You smell of clean linen, cotton scented of high cost liberty.
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Paolo Giuseppe Mazzarello
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Cheryl Lynn Moyer-peele 25 November 2008

Paolo - This American girl is amazed by your authentic description of who we can be. A blessed day to you - Cheryl

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Chitra - 10 July 2008

wonderful poem, brilliant piece of creative acumen

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Onelia Avelar 07 June 2008

Nostalgic blend of aromas, as taken from the childhood, from ones prime 'smell of clean linen, cotton scented of high cost liberty', a hint of forgotten past and start of new life in America 'American Diaspora Street widens out' - a snapshot of a dawn of someone`s life already in the past, somewhere in June. Fascinating and highly readable poem.

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