Monday, September 7, 2015

Ode To A Tree In Autumn Comments

Rating: 5.0

You carried us all through Earth’s fragrant song
Did blossom from birth throughout glorious days
But we did not notice we walked on by so wrong
Now in tragic splendour your allure now decays
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Kumarmani Mahakul 07 September 2015

Your bridal beauty now faded your life at an end I remember your virgin charm at the onset of spring......Deeply envisioned. Attractive and intensive narration I found in this poem so orderly presented. Many thanks dear David Sir, may God increase your imagination. ....10

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